SS2 Gun-Run Episode 1

[6751129c03b49Bugga62]

Just the first episode of my commentary/gun-run. I decided to post it here for promotion.

Tell me what you guys think? What could I improve?

Enjoy...

[6751129c03ec4Marvin]

That schizophrenic commentary using a shift in color is both confusing and distracting.

[6751129c03fe3Bugga62]

 Yeah, I should have thought that having more than one color for text was going to be confusing. It is supposed to be Goggle's conscience talking to him, barking orders at him, etc.

[6751129c040cfpsikoticsilver]

I really like it, keep them coming